I know most of the commercial work in your reel and I like it- good job! You've got some great material to work with, and although it looks good I feel that you can make it look even better. Present your demo in a story, a bit more in tune with the audio track- like in the beginning of your reel you have a strong feminine feel to that part of the cut that works really well. Include bits of the original audio of the clips and even use a couple of songs for the main audio track. They don't allow for 4.5 cows, so I rate this 5- good work!